Haibon haiku Challenge/ Constancy

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Constancy.

 

I looked at the figures carved into the stone and was reminded of the Ode on a Grecian Urn. Keats was fascinated as I was by the concept of a beauty that would survive eternity. As I looked I reflected on my own life. Age was getting to me; I could no longer run for the bus and each morning a ritual of drug taking kept me vertical.

Here on this stone these figures would be forever young. They would watch a myriad of visitors traipse past year after year. These visitors would age and die but these figures would always be there looking out over the ever changing world around them.

Feeling this was a privilege I never believed I would experience I released the hand brake on my walker and headed off to see the next wonderful exhibit.

 

beauty unchanging

standing tall for eternity

forever constant.

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18 Responses to Haibon haiku Challenge/ Constancy

  1. I relate – I enjoyed.

  2. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    The photo also reminded me of ‘Ode on a Grecian Urn’ but I had no idea what to do with it. You have used it perfectly. And I thought the haiku was beautiful.

  3. nightlake's avatar nightlake says:

    Reminds me of songs that say, ‘you and I are sure to get old, but love (or beauty in this case) would never age.’ This was well written and much appreciate your contribution this week

  4. So well written and so poignant.
    Loved the haiku.

  5. So a profound a truth. Well written 🙂

  6. Penny L Howe's avatar Penny L Howe says:

    Michael, This is excellent, just loved it! The flow, the written words, your thoughts, the feelings, all of it! 🙂

    • Michael's avatar summerstommy2 says:

      Thanks Penny as soon as I saw the photo I thought Keats. I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your lovely comment I am feeling a little overwhelmed of late at the positive responses I get to my work no matter ‘silly’ some of them appear to be.

  7. Alastair's avatar Alastair says:

    Penny tweeted this so came for a look. It’s excellent

  8. Baigneur des Bois's avatar Ye Pirate says:

    The juxtaposition is so clever – really hit home. Beautifully-written, with superb timing. We’ll be doing the Honourable Mentions in Dispatches on a monthly basis soon, which should work well, with continued weekly challenges.

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