Late afternoon and it’s been hot
A day out of the heat.
A gentle breeze suggests cool.
We sit at my back fence,
Watch as the day ebbs away.
The sun slides behind the distant gums
Holding hands, we chat, take in the peace
Afforded us by the end of day.
Written for: https://areadingwritr.wordpress.com/2016/07/05/word-high-july-kalinaw/
That had a feeling of calm and contentment.
Thank you Lyn, mission accomplished and its like that most days down there…
Most definitely tranquility.
It certainly is
There is serenity in the comfortable closeness of a hand-held as sun turns to stars.
There is indeed…
And your backyard looks like the perfect spot for such tranquility and hand-holding, if I might be so bold.
I would like to think so…
awwww. the comfort of having someone in the simplest scene can’t be bought by any amount of money. you captured the word so well, Michael! 🙂 ❤
Thank you Rose….that’s a lovely comment
and an honest one! 🙂 You’re welcome! 😀
A very restful read–lovely.
Thank you Stella..have a good evening….
I will–thank you 🙂
This is a nice poem. I don’t know much about poetry, but this seems to be a nice thought.
Thank you David, to think it is a nice poem is praise enough….
Michael, a nice poem that captures the whole essence of Kalinaw. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks Davy, appreciate you stopping by.