Reena’s Exploration Challenge #Week 35

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What does this quote inspire in you, or remind you of? It could be a personal situation like the crimes committed by a family member. It could be a political, business or corporate situation. It could be a social or environmental issue, that you feel strongly about. In short, it is about the proverbial elephant in the room. 

It was an obvious fact and glaringly clear to anyone who thought to notice that his loneliness was something that to him was the one thing that was crushing him.

Everyone thought of him as a ‘nice’ guy. He was intelligent, affable, generous and had demonstrated an extraordinary commitment to family.

He epitomised the very elephant in the room.

No one engaged him in conversation. Instead, they avoided him, if they did engage with him they found it easy to move away, find a reason to break from him and move onto someone more interesting.

They didn’t know what it was he was doing on his own again. A hospital visit, a time when some succour would have been helpful.

Instead, they pretended he was ok. He was always ok. It was like a mantra they believed he recited and so they too held the same belief.

Inside he cried, his loneliness building every day, he feared it would reach a point where he would forget the reality he lived in and sink into the mire of his own solitude.

But when he was approached up went that familiar cheerfulness and he’d again pretend to be ok. Sometimes it was easier than talking about himself, as it was he knew most people accepted him as he was, and that didn’t draw any of them closer to him.

 

Written for: https://reinventionsreena.wordpress.com/2018/05/04/reenas-exploration-challenge-week-35/

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Envy: Vera Winston-Jones Part 4

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Image: Envy © by Iza-nagi

Vera returned home to find Ernest sitting at the breakfast bar, a coffee in one hand and a chocolate biscuit in the other.

He had that supercilious look on his face, one Vera had grown to despise in recent times.

He announced as she came into the kitchen that he had secured a job at the local Gonners store.

Vera looked at him and asked, “Doing what?”

“I’m on the paint counter, helping with the paint and assisting people with colour selection,” replied Ernest feeling he had, at last, managed to gain a foot hole in their waning relationship.

“But you know nothing about paint. You’ve never painted a thing in your life. So you conned your way into this job?”

“They were looking for an older man. They want to believe an older man can instil confidence in their customers.”

“Ernest you are unbelievable. You convinced them you knew something about paint? How?”

“I told them I had renovated several houses, and I have.”

“You engaged a builder every time, and I was the one who organised the painting. You’ll come undone again I can see it. I suppose the more they stroked your ego the further you went with it all?

With that, Ernest shut up realising he was on thin ice so took himself outside to finish his coffee.

Vera retreated to her room and thought about her morning with Mary. Mary had revealed far more than Vera expected, she was anticipating a quiet morning, some coffee and teacake and the exchange of pleasantries.

It was clear to her that Mary was after a friend, as was Vera, but it developed far quicker than Vera thought it might.

Mary’s revelations about Ray had struck a nerve with her. She too had been wronged but in a different way. Vera had always been aware of the precarious nature of her relationship with Ernest. He was a shallow man, driven in business to achieve and be better than the next guy. She was well aware of his propensity to walk over anyone in his way. She saw her role within the marriage to support him and provide him with a confidante. She had stroked his ego, been at his beck and call and had tried at every turn to be the devoted, attentive wife.

When things went bad, firstly the scandal focusing on his financial advise to his clients and if that wasn’t bad enough the news that he and his secretary had been having an affair had cut her to the quick.

Up until then, Vera had been sure she could ride out the scandal with her husband.

Now with the news of his deceit, she felt such a fool. She’d trusted him believing he was a part of the machine that made up their marriage.

She felt outraged and humiliated at the same time. She’d made so many special efforts to maintain the marriage, dressed to the nines to make him proud of her, organised dinners for him and clients, had prepared late night dinners for him when he’d worked late, had always been willing in bed to satisfy him.

They had everything they needed materially; it was as much a desire to love her husband and show him she did that motivated her.

It was a month before the news hit that she began to notice Ernest was distracted, he stopped talking to her, appeared moody most of the time, came home later each evening, ate very little and said he was tired and wanted to go to bed rather than spend any time with her.

She saw the loneliness descending on her and soon began to understand why she was feeling isolated in their marriage.

It was a dreadful time for her, and she was determined that from now on she would be holding the reins to the Winston-Jones carriage.

 

Earlier parts to the story can be read here:

Part One: https://summerstommy.com/2018/04/23/envy-mary-dowds-story/

Part Two: https://summerstommy.com/2018/04/24/envy-vera-winston-jones-story/

Part Three: https://summerstommy.com/2018/04/25/envy-mary-dowd-part-2/

Part Four: https://summerstommy.com/2018/04/26/envy-vera-winston-jones-part-2/

Part Five: https://summerstommy.com/2018/04/28/envy-mary-dowd-part-3-2/

Part Six: https://summerstommy.com/2018/04/29/envy-vera-winston_jones-part-3/

Part 7: https://summerstommy.com/2018/04/30/envy-ernest-winston-jones-part-one/

Part 8: https://summerstommy.com/2018/05/01/envy-ernest-winston-jones-part-2/

Part 9: https://summerstommy.com/2018/05/02/envy-mary-dowd-part-four/

 

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Tale Weaver/Fairy Tale – # 169 –Through The Portal

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When the boy visited his grandmother, she told him it wouldn’t be wise if he ventured too far from home.

Being a curious boy, he went exploring and at the bottom of Grandmother’s garden he found a hole in the fence.

Looking around he saw there was no one to stop him, so he stepped through.

Immediately he was surrounded by the brightest light. Once his eyes adjusted, he made out the strangest of things. There was a road leading down into a valley with no road coming back. He knew this as the road signs pointed in one direction.

To the side of where he was standing was a small roadside stall manned by an odd creature with long pointy ears and a vest made of gold.

Above the man was a sign saying Found Things and on the wall behind him was an array of things like rubber boots, hammers, a beach ball and numerous thumbs all neatly arranged and price tagged.

The boy was both mystified and puzzled by what he saw.

Then he felt a tug on his arm, and a small girl with pigtails and pink ribbons tied to each asked him for the note she was sure he had brought with him.

“They said a boy would come with a note to show me the way home,” she explained.

“The hole in the fence is just here,” said the boy pointing from where he’d come only to find he was standing in front of a large sign: “Welcome to the end of the line”.

He hurriedly looked around and found no hole in the fence; in fact, there was no fence at all.

“It was just there,” he explained.

“It’s like that here,” said the small girl, “but everything changes and I’ve been waiting such a long time.”

At this point, she broke into tears, and the boy finding a handkerchief in his pocket handed it to her.

She blew noisily into it before handing it back to him.

“So where are we?” asked the boy.

“We’re here,” replied the girl wiping her nose on her sleeve. “We’ll have to wander about asking questions and seeking an exit and goodness knows how long that will take.”

“But I have to get back, my grandmother will be furious as she told me not to go out of the yard and now here I am with no way of getting home.”

“Come,” said the girl, “there’s a sage lives nearby, he’s a bit loopy, but sometimes he gives you a clue as to how to get out of here. He’s just down the road here.”

The boy feeling more and more anxious followed her forgetting the road only went one way.

In front of him, the small girl grinned evilly knowing she’d snared another child into the portal’s trap.

 

Written for: https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2018/05/03/tale-weaver-fairy-tale-169-through-the-portal/

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100 Word Wednesday: Week 69

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Off the coast from Perth in Western Australia is the island of Rottnest or Ratsnest. The name was given to it when sailors discovered way back in time. The island is home to a small marsupial called a quokka.

To the Dutch sailors, they appeared as giant rats and hence the name.

They are a protected species as being unique to the island. They live happily among the tourists.

Originally the island was settled as a gaol for indigenous prisoners. The gaol buildings are still there, preserved and used as accommodation. It also has more modern and luxurious places to stay.

Below is an image of a quokka.

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Written for: https://bikurgurl.com/2018/05/02/100-word-wednesday-week-69/

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Envy: Mary Dowd Part Four

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Image: Envy © by Iza-nagi

Mary stood at the door watching Vera disappear up the path and back to her house. It had been a far more enjoyable morning than Mary anticipated.

Vera was not unlike herself. Once you stripped away the pearl necklace and matching ear-rings Vera was a very down to earth woman.

Once the pleasantries had been spoken, it was question time. How long had Mary lived there? What did she do with herself? How close were the shops? Was there a David Jones store nearby?

Each woman had a story, and it surprised Mary when she glanced at the clock to see two hours had passed.

Despite the privileged life Vera had led underneath she was a woman damaged, with needs and desires the same as everyone else.

She was surprised by Vera’s attention to her answers. Mary had lived a solitary life, she didn’t mix all that well and Ray had made her life a nightmare with his demands and criticism. His leaving, had in fact, been a great relief for Mary.

With his drinking releasing his inner demons she had walked in fear of him for many years. Social outings were edged with trepidation less he drank too much, and in a social setting, he was not adverse to levelling criticism and sarcasm her way.

So often towards the end of their marriage, she had felt so belittled by him she would actively seek excuses not to go out with him.

This didn’t help as he used her excuses to further rage against her.

By this time unbeknownst to Mary, Ray had engaged in a full-on affair with Maggie Jupp, a client he had been doing a lot of plumbing work for.

When the time came, and he announced his intention to leave her he bombarded her with every fault he perceived she had.

She didn’t satisfy him, she was slovenly, she was the world’s worse cook, her dress sense was shocking, and an embarrassment and she’d let herself go such she’d become a millstone around his neck.

His life was one long, dull event thanks to her. As a result, once he was gone, she had retreated into the house finding little reason to go out and be recognised as the failed woman she was sure others saw her as.

Mary was aware that depression had descended upon her but had not sought any help being essentially too afraid to go out and admit failure to anyone.

So she stowed herself away, living a life of organised routine pretending she was okay and pushing all thoughts of her hurt from Ray out of her mind.

Vera had listened and now understood why Mary looked so challenged when she first knocked on her door.

To Vera, Mary was a step or two ahead of her even if Mary didn’t see herself as any sort of free woman.

Mary’s story had given Vera strength to tell her story as well.

 

Earlier parts can be read here:

Part One: https://summerstommy.com/2018/04/23/envy-mary-dowds-story/

Part Two: https://summerstommy.com/2018/04/24/envy-vera-winston-jones-story/

Part Three: https://summerstommy.com/2018/04/25/envy-mary-dowd-part-2/

Part Four: https://summerstommy.com/2018/04/26/envy-vera-winston-jones-part-2/

Part Five: https://summerstommy.com/2018/04/28/envy-mary-dowd-part-3-2/

Part Six: https://summerstommy.com/2018/04/29/envy-vera-winston_jones-part-3/

 

Part 7: https://summerstommy.com/2018/04/30/envy-ernest-winston-jones-part-one/

 

Part 8: https://summerstommy.com/2018/05/01/envy-ernest-winston-jones-part-2/

 

 

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FLASH FICTION FOR THE PURPOSEFUL PRACTITIONER- 2018 WEEK #18

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Our tour guide Roger decided we’d had enough fun in the town of Morgue and announced we were on the move.

With my aged companion Joyce, we drove into a small bush town, and Roger informed us this was the town of Nipcat. Joyce was immediately concerned by the large cat pelt stretched and drying below the towns welcome sign which in part read: “Welcome to Nipcat, we love our cats.”

Roger informed us there was so much to see and that we should begin our visit with a leisurely walk along the main street.

We didn’t see a single cat as we strolled along, but when we came to the Nipcat Tourist and Cat Lovers Emporium, we found them.

There was an array of cat products from handbags to coats, even a pair of slippers with a built-in meow as you walked in them.

Joyce was horrified, even though she was more your dog person than a cat lady. We hastily left the store and made our way to our hotel where we hoped we’d be safe from all things cat.

Written for: https://flashfictionforthepracticalpractitioner.wordpress.com/2018/05/02/flash-fiction-for-the-purposeful-practitioner-2018-week-18/

 

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In Other Words, at last…

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At last.

At last, the wait was over.

Stagnation came to an end.

Once again the words could flow.

The weekly challenge had returned.

Normality was restored; at last, there was harmony within the universe.

 

Written for: https://patriciasplace.me/2018/05/02/in-other-words-at-last/

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Envy: Ernest Winston Jones – Part 2

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The morning started off in what was now a predictable way. Vera said nothing to him as he found himself some breakfast, a few bits of toast on which he spread some candied honey.

The night before they had had an argument about his financial dealings.

Vera was furious over what he had done, such that she said he was to get himself out first thing in the morning to find a job. She didn’t care what it was so long as it earned money they might survive on.

So feeling he didn’t have a leg to stand on and that Vera was now calling the shots, he planned to take himself off to find work.

The car he drove off in was a humbling experience in itself. A second hand Hyundai was all they could afford, and it was a well-used car. The seats were torn, the air-conditioner no longer worked and it had wind up windows, something Ernest felt more embarrassed about than anything else.

He decided to try the local Gonners Store, a huge rambling hardware store three blocks from where he was living. He had made up a small CV the night before and hoped the recruitment officer wasn’t a former client or for that matter read the papers.

He was shown into the office of the RH representative and given an application for employment form. It was the standard employment questionnaire, and he had to admit to being previously employed, and he decided his former job wasn’t something he could avoid what with internet searches so easy to conduct.

Eventually, he was ushered into the office of a young man who looked like he had just finished school.

The interview went well with the young man telling him he was recently married and he and his new wife were looking for some financial advice. Ernest reddened at the suggestion and quickly advised the young man he was no longer in that business and so might not be the right person to ask.

The conversation turned to the skills Ernest had, his past experience in sales and his ability to communicate. It was obvious to the young man that Ernest had excellent communication skills and experience and he made it known that the store was looking for an experienced man to work in their paint section.

At this suggestion, Ernest bent the truth slightly by implying he had renovated several houses in his time and knew a lot about paint, painting and colour selection.

In a matter of moments, Ernest had been employed and the necessary forms filled in.

There was one thing though the young man said, would Ernest be okay with his nametag calling him Ernie.

Ernest had been Ernest all his life, and he had bitten savagely at anyone who lessened his name to Ernie. But in this circumstance where he was now desperate, he agreed to the change.

The young man outlined to him that Ernie was a more colloquial name and people would feel more relaxed around a man called Ernie than Ernest. Added to that there was the fact that customers felt an older man offered them life experience, which was important when it came to matters of painting.

And so Ernie was brought into existence and went home buoyed by the fact he had found employment.

Vera was not there when he arrived home so he stowed his new Gonners uniform away thinking she’d be pleased he now had a job, he’d be out of her hair, and he wouldn’t have to face the humiliation of his name tag, at least until tomorrow.

 

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The Doors – Twittering Tales #82 – 1 May 2018

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Who’d a thought so many choices so many doors?
From bubbling lava pools to tropical forests, to dancing girls and boys, to vast sandy spaces.
The choice was ours, but we had one choice.
The loosely moraled joyously chose the dancers, the wise and stoic the sand.
No return no regrets.

Written for: https://katmyrman.com/2018/05/01/twittering-tales-82-1-may-2018/

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Envy: Ernest Winston-Jones – Part One

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Ernest was hanging by a finger over a drop that went a long way down. ‘This was it,’ he thought as rescue was out of the question.

Just as he was about to let go a hand grabbed his wrist, and he found himself being pulled back up.

He looked up to see his rescuer was Vera.

‘This can’t be right,’ thought Ernest, ‘where did she come from and she’d never been strong enough.’

The shock of Vera’s face woke him, and he sat up in bed.

Then it came back to him. He was in trouble. Big trouble when it was Vera who was his saviour.

Today he had awoken to his first day in the new house. He lay in his bed remembering what had happened.

Everything had gone so well. His land purchase with the help of his mate on the council had gone through. The land from initial surveys indicated it was the site of an Aboriginal midden but Ernest and his friend had hushed it up, and all would have proceeded smoothly if a labourer on the site upon digging up Aboriginal stone tools had not told his mate from the local paper about what he’d found.

Before he knew it every heritage group for miles was involved, the local land council stepped in demanding an inquiry and the publicity surrounding the corruption involved proved his undoing.

On top of that when his business dealings were looked into he’d been caught out offering poor financial advice, and many of his clients had lost everything. There was a looming class action against him, and he knew it was the end of the road for him in the financial business. Added to that his secretary, with whom he had been having a raging affair, had resigned after Vera became aware of what he was up to.

As a result of the turmoil, he had to sell their beach side home along with their prized possessions such as his expensive car and furnishings and the extensive share portfolio he had built up.

The only money they had was a little Vera had put away and managed to hide from the auditors. With that, they had secured a loan to buy the house. For Ernest, the house meant some sense of future and security. But the descent into near penury weighed heavily on him.

For the first time in his married life, he was dependent on Vera.

She had not spoken to him for the past week, and he found himself very alone in the world.

She now held the financial reins and had made it clear to him that he would have to go out and find a job, ‘shovelling shit’ if he had to.

Her bluntness had surprised him, as Vera had always been so compliant to his wishes. After all, he had provided her with a life style she did enjoy, she didn’t have to work, and he took her on an overseas holiday each year.

He lay in bed thinking how his life had unravelled so much in the past six months. In his mind, he knew he had done the wrong thing over the Aboriginal site, but greed had got the better of him. That and the thrill of his affair with Madison.

She was a beautiful girl, had been his secretary for over a year before they became romantically involved. It had been so easy, late nights working together, their conversations which always led to their complaints about their current partners and after one trip out of town they found themselves at dinner and then afterwards in bed.

Ernest felt compelled to continue the affair. Madison was a keen and willing lover, she was everything Vera wasn’t.

In the background, he could hear the kettle boiling and made his way to the bathroom to ready himself for what most likely the first day of the rest of his life.

Ernest prided himself on his dress. He was a suit man, and his shirts were always ironed perfectly, though in recent days he’d learned to do it himself as Vera had told him her days as his maid were over.

But today was not a business day, today was a job-hunting day. He needed to look as humble as he could.

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