Crimson’s Creative Challenge Challenge – When I was Young.

I’ve done stupid things in my life you know.


Yes, it’s hard to believe I know. When I was young and my hormones were raging.

You have a list of them?

Oh yes, I was once in love with Gus Low. He lived on the farm next door. He had his own plane and all that. I was young and fickle and so I decided to show Gus how much I thought of him. We had an old cart and with our our draught horse, Nelly, we scoured our creeks finding stones to create a love heart. I built it on top of Sugarloaf Hill where I knew Gus would be flying over.

How did it go? Was Gus impressed?

I’ve no idea. Dad made me return the rocks, said I was using up valuable grazing land, so that was the end of that.

I would have been impressed if I saw it.

No, you wouldn’t, you’ve hardly a romantic bone in your body.

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18 Responses to Crimson’s Creative Challenge Challenge – When I was Young.

  1. Jen Goldie says:

    I love the last line PERFECT!

  2. Sadje says:

    Aw, such a romantic gesture ruined by practical papa!

  3. GHLearner says:

    I think I detect a tiny hint of jealousy there. What a lovely story.

  4. Love it. It’s kinda fun and yet serious

  5. Loved this Michael. Last line was a tad sad!

  6. Patricia says:

    Oh, the travails of youth.

  7. Lyn says:

    All that hard work for nought. 😌

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