Crimson’s Creative Challenge #48 – Crisp Takes a Dive.


Crisp, my aged companion, loved old things. I’m sure it was the reason she kept me around. I was reliable, and she felt safe with me.

The arched bridge at CCC48 was one such structure. Her map detailed the history of the bridge going back to medieval times, the arch was a marvellous example of the architecture of the time.

“Just think,” she said “we are standing on a bridge that’s stood here for hundreds of years. Made to last it was.”

Crisp being naturally curious, ventured a step too close to the edge and before we knew it, she’d toppled into the pond.

I rushed to help her, thankfully, the pool was only a foot deep, and she was soon standing looking wet and bedraggled.

She let out a gasp, spat out a mouthful of pond and said:” Well don’t just stand there looking gormless, give me a hand.”


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14 Responses to Crimson’s Creative Challenge #48 – Crisp Takes a Dive.

  1. Sadje says:

    Poor lady! No fun getting a dunking in dirty pool water.

  2. That water might be shallow, but it can be quite a shock when you fall in… as my daughter discovered at 3 years old. Although it wasn’t this bridge, it was this river.
    Poor Crisp. Dignity dampened too, no doubt.

  3. Ramyani Bhattacharya says:

    It was such an entertaining read. I love to follow their adventures around😁

  4. Dale says:

    Poor Crisp’s pride was the most wounded, I am sure. Good thing you were there to lend her a hand…

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