FFfAW Challenge-Week of 11-07-2017 – Norbet and Noreen.


Photo prompt: Enisa

From the sky, it appeared the perfect place to land. It was elevated and would give them an ideal spot from which to launch their take over.

Norbert led the way and was ever keen to get started as that meant more time with the beautiful Noreen whom he was keen to get to know sooner rather than later. After all, once they had control, it was up to them to populate the place and take advantage of the rich resources they knew lay beneath the earth. As they went into their descent, Norbert couldn’t help but marvel at the tell-tale signs of lust building within his body.

Then disaster struck. Their magnetic bodies hit the containers, triggered off a series of reactions and Norbert and Noreen froze in an electric shower of sparks to become a curious exhibit in a travelling circus that proved recycled metal could be turned into interesting and worthwhile shapes.


Written for: https://flashfictionforaspiringwriters.wordpress.com/2017/11/06/fffaw-challenge-week-of-11-07-2017/

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7 Responses to FFfAW Challenge-Week of 11-07-2017 – Norbet and Noreen.

  1. Reena Saxena says:

    Interesting! This brought a smile 🙂

  2. Wonderful story! A sad fate for Norbert and Noreen – although probably a good thing for the human race.

  3. Iain Kelly says:

    Poor Norbert – so close and yet so far 🙂

  4. James says:

    Evil plot foiled again. 😉

  5. Poor Norbert and Noreen! Their love will never be requited! Great story Michael!

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