#MicroMondays – 4

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Using 42 words only and including this line: “THE ROOM FOLDED FLAT AROUND HIM

 

She had promised him an unforgettable experience, but as the morning progressed, there seemed little prospect she could make the earth move for him. Despite her best efforts and greatest of intentions, THE ROOM FOLDED FLAT AROUND HIM leaving him more dejected.

 

 

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7 Responses to #MicroMondays – 4

  1. Fandango's avatar Fandango says:

    Great expectations can sometimes lead to great disappointment.

  2. Varad's avatar Varad says:

    Murphy’s law at its finest. When expectations and anticipation are high, the result often falls flat. Nice one, Michael. Thanks for joining us @ #MicroMondays

  3. Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly says:

    What a disappointment…

  4. Namratha's avatar Namratha says:

    Fandango said it! High expectations can lead to disappointments even when someone has the best intentions.

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