July 20, 2017 prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that features a pie. You can make it any kind of pie, focus on filling or crust, or tell us about the pie-maker. How does pie set a tone in a story? Does it warm the hearth or bring disappointment?
It started every Friday morning at 6am sharp. A steady stream of shoppers knocking on the rear door of the bakery. They were after Herb’s Special Pie. Baked in the early hours, a mixture of meat and secret ingredients.
They were so sought after he couldn’t keep up with demand. Backdoor sales were all he could manage.
At home, you never put your pie in the fridge. You left it out until evening giving the secret ingredients more time to do their thing. Eating your pie gave you the expected tilt in your kilt and smile on your dial.
Written for: https://carrotranch.com/2017/07/21/july-20-flash-fiction-challenge-2/
Now that’s a fun pie to try! I’m wondering what herbs Herb uses? 😀
I think I’ll need another 99 words 😁
Ha, ha! That could be a sequel!
After the last story of yours I read this morning, I just wasn’t 100% sure where you were going to go for the filling in this one lol
Lol well each tale is a story in itself
Back door pie, huh? Herb, huh? Hmm. It is all about the secret ingredients.
Exactly. Thanks for stopping by.
LOL – now this is a pie tale to remember! wonderful 99 flash – hahahahaha 😉
Thanks Pat, a lot of fun as always..
Secret Herbs and the Chef’s culinary talent jacks up the demand. i can feel the lingering aroma of the pie.well baked er well written.
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Thanks so much Kalpana
I could do with one of those pies.
Couldn’t we all…lol
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Lots of laughs, Michael. I lovely piece.
Thanks Robbie, lovely you could stop by.