You swim around my feet
Play games with my toes
Kid me into plunging deep
But always do you hold me up.
I’m lucky you do that
Selfless and caring
It’s who you are
I’ll take you any day.
Your music is enchanting
Your reach into my soul
Enticing and enthralling
I hang off every note.
I’m lucky you can do that
Selfless and caring
It’s who you are
I’ll have you any day.
You have never led me along
You’re upfront in every way
I value and treasure
Every day I have with you.
I’m lucky to say all that
Selfless and caring
It’s who you are
Unbounded is our love.
Written for: https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2016/12/11/writing-prompt-december-11th-let-me-refrain/
I really love the simplicity with which you convey something that is often perceived as complicated. I love the repetition, it was candid and sweet, and served well to emphasize the good emotions.
Thank you so much. I really liked the image you used..
Beautiful. The refrain created such a loving structure.
Thank you Lorraine.
You are most welcome.
Beautiful poeming, Michael 🙂
This is really beautifully written. A simple yet meaningful love poem. Great job!