Writing Prompt December 11th – Let me Refrain – Selfless and Caring.

the_mermaid_song_by_isismaathapy

You swim around my feet

Play games with my toes

Kid me into plunging deep

But always do you hold me up.

 

I’m lucky you do that

Selfless and caring

It’s who you are

I’ll take you any day.

 

Your music is enchanting

Your reach into my soul

Enticing and enthralling

I hang off every note.

 

I’m lucky you can do that

Selfless and caring

It’s who you are

I’ll have you any day.

 

You have never led me along

You’re upfront in every way

I value and treasure

Every day I have with you.

 

I’m lucky to say all that

Selfless and caring

It’s who you are

Unbounded is our love.

 

 

Written for: https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2016/12/11/writing-prompt-december-11th-let-me-refrain/

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7 Responses to Writing Prompt December 11th – Let me Refrain – Selfless and Caring.

  1. Oloriel says:

    I really love the simplicity with which you convey something that is often perceived as complicated. I love the repetition, it was candid and sweet, and served well to emphasize the good emotions.

  2. Beautiful. The refrain created such a loving structure.

  3. Lori Carlson says:

    Beautiful poeming, Michael 🙂

  4. mandibelle16 says:

    This is really beautifully written. A simple yet meaningful love poem. Great job!

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