This week we are asked to: pen down your deepest feelings regarding the subject of rain.
I awaken on a shivery morning
The rain echoes against the iron roof
Reminding me to nestle longer.
Its cold out, stay and snuggle.
I feel your arms wrapped round me
Holding me close, your warmth
Invigorates and energises me.
The rain relentless all night
The creeks will be rising
Maybe later the water will reach the back fence.
I turn and take you in my arms
Our legs entwine, our hearts awaken
We welcome our intimacy.
The rain sets our minds at ease,
No need to hurry, stay, enjoy.
Later we sit beside the glowing fire
Outside the rain drizzles down
Persistent, like my love for you.
Written for: http://www.adashofsunny.com/prompt-nights-rain-showers-my-spirit-and-waters-my-soul-16/
Such a sweet and sensuous write Michael 😀 you have captured some truly magical moments here. Beautifully penned. Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support ❤❤
Lots of love,
Sanaa
My pleasure Sanaa, have a great weekend..
You too 🙂 have a lovely weekend.
Rain on the roof…best sound in the world when you’re trying to sleep.
Yes and other things…..
No better sound than rain in the morning lying next to the one you love 😊
That’s what I think too. Thanks for your delightful comment.
You’re welcome. 😊
This is such a beautiful poem, I really loved it.
Thank you so much, appreciate you stopping by.
Oh the memories this piece invokes…..Sunday morning football ignored as we knew the pitch would be waterlogged. What a beautiful link to have with the persistent rain 🙂 XXX
Thanks so much Georgina so pleased you could connect with my words.
Exceedingly Lovely!
Thank you Sandra.
Lovely and sensual, I can imagine what a special morning that would be 🙂
Thank you so much, I appreciate you stopping by.
I’m doing a serious amount of cooing right now. This is so sweet, Michael–real, beautiful and raining love on us. ♥
Thank you for your lovely comment Magaly.
Oh, that is just gorgeous! Been there, done that – but it took your words to bring it to new life for me.
Thank you Rosemary, glad I could get you to relive….have a good weekend..
beautiful…
Thank you so much Sumana…..have a lovely day…
Hello Michael, I’ve come over from Jacquie’s to find this delightful feast of words at your place 🙂
Thank you so much I shall go and check out your blog. Thanks for the follow.
A shivery morning snuggled up in the arms of the one we love – what could be better
Yes I think so too. Thanks for stopping by.
Outside the rain drizzles down
Persistent, like my love for you….. lovely
Thank you Debi, glad you could connect.
This piece is electric! Love it!
Thank you Michelle I’m happy you found it so. Thanks for the follow call by anytime
Nice to think of rain as enhancing intimacy and love. Enjoyed reading this.
Thank you Myrna have a great day
Such a delightful and romantic piece! Love rains.
Thanks Khaya, appreciate you stopping by.