Writing Prompt #137 “The Fool”

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The teacher frowned

An all too familiar scowl

‘You are a fool,’ he muttered

Loud enough the back row heard.

I sat in the front seat, eyes focused

My mind a tizz. What? What?

Me? A fool, but I’m top of the class

Last term I was the best

What has happened?

‘Your homework,’ he announced to the class

Suddenly broken from their usual gossiping

They faced him waiting for his pontificating to commence,

Relieved it wasn’t one of them being accused

But me the smartest kid in class.

Humiliated, taunted, held to ridicule

He displayed my homework

Beneath the red pen emblazoned on my page

Was my last semblance of dignity.

‘An example for all,’ he said

‘Let it be known,’ he declared

‘I want accuracy, precision, truth

Not your own thoughts

Use the textbook as it was intended.’

As a purveyor of historical truth?

My work he dropped onto the floor

As if harbouring disease.

Offered praise to those around me

For copying from his hallowed book.

My desecrated effort I salvaged

Slipped into my bag,

As sniggers began around me.

Inside a voice heralded my foolishness

Stayed with me many a year

‘You’re a fool,’ it said. ‘If you don’t play the game.’

 

 

 

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10 Responses to Writing Prompt #137 “The Fool”

  1. I always hated teachers and lecturers like that. Totally got the wrong end of education. Wanted puppets not students. Their loss.

    • I totally agree with you, they missed the point of learning wanted little replicas of themselves and produced students bored to tears by their teaching or lack of it…..thanks for stopping by.

      • I always remember one telling me I was wrong in my interpretation of a poem. Like there was only one way to interpret it, even if you could justify your reaction. It’s a shame how many people have been put off education by just such teaching. Rule-bookers! Their book. :/

  2. Ugh I agree it is their loss because their is nothing more beautiful or productive than creativity

  3. Most if not all of my teachers were like this. You did very well describing them!

  4. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    I can still hear my KINDERGARTEN teacher telling me to be quiet or she was going to take my report card away & change my grades. Still 40+ years later – I want to go back in time & give her a piece of my mind. LOL

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