Photo Challenge #68, Pause, July 07, 2015 – He loves Me, He Loves Me Not

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He loves me, he loves me not.

Fill it up again

He loves me, he loves me not.

Don’t talk to me.

He said he’d be here

Barman give me another one.

He said to wait around for him

Now I’m getting so pissed off.

He said he was excited to meet up

I’ve gone to a lot of trouble

He said he had great news for me

I can’t be that important.

He said to get a drink don’t wait for him

I’m not; I’m on my third

He said to sit at the bar

There’s nowhere else, this’ a dump.

He said to wait till he arrives

What choices do I have?

He said he’d make it worth my while

The drunk in the corner’s looking attractive.

He doesn’t love me, I know he doesn’t

He never did, the slimy bastard

I bet he’s off with his slutty assistant

Think I’ll just get shit faced.

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15 Responses to Photo Challenge #68, Pause, July 07, 2015 – He loves Me, He Loves Me Not

  1. men, men, men! well-penned, Michael 🙂

  2. I can feel her mounting agitation but you also feel the rejection and pain powerful write Michael

  3. Oliana's avatar Oliana says:

    Great write, Michael. Men!! Can’t live with them, can’t live without them(sigh)

  4. dellclover's avatar DELL CLOVER says:

    Oh geez–there’s a lesson there, girly: don’t go to bars alone (if at all).

  5. Yikes! It felt like a train wreck. Who will help her get home?

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