Writing Prompt #114 “Collage” – Pretence

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What pretence to play at happy families.

The key to my heart

Was the key to my doom.

You locked me in

Grabbed me by the short and curlies

Then locked out my heart

Denied me love

But scapegoating was your weapon of choice.

The simple became the complicated

The necessary the arbitrary

Common sense a random behaviour.

The love you shared came at a price

Conditional always on my compliance.

There were moments when you appeared to reach out

Offered tokens of love

For that’s all they were

Figments of your warped imagination.

Then one day I took off

Left the nest, stood up

Moved out, no return.

You tried to temp me

Made offers as hollow as you are

With trinkets, promises and feigned desire.

Now I play true happy families

With honesty, love, caring

Compassion and hope.

It tears you up I know

And I’m glad

As I just don’t care.

Written for: https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2015/07/05/writing-prompt-114-collage/

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16 Responses to Writing Prompt #114 “Collage” – Pretence

  1. dellclover's avatar DELL CLOVER says:

    Painful, but I’m glad you’re in a loving situation now.

  2. taleweavering's avatar phylor says:

    Great that you “now play true happy families.”

  3. Poignant and your interpretation is really outstanding you saw so deeply into the images and really used them

  4. Linda Vernon's avatar Linda Vernon says:

    This says it all! That simple first line hit it out of the ball park and the rest brought it on home! Wow!

  5. Jules's avatar julespaige says:

    I think many can fit right into this scenario – I can. I often learned by ‘Do as I say not as I do.’ So I knew when my own family came around I would live by ‘Do as I say and as I do’. Much happier that way.

    • This was a wonderful comment Jules, you summed up how I treated my kids as they grew up in deference to their mother’s approach which was the ‘do as I say not as I do’ approach….thanks so much for your input and comment…

  6. mj6969's avatar mj6969 says:

    This is one absolutely stunning piece Michael.

    It speaks so passionately and clearly, each word precision edged – cutting – and vivid – offering such depth and insight to the pain that can be inflicted – and yet – the resolution – the strength in making a choice – difficult but necessary – and the courage to recognize that “no” is an option.

    What strength – determination- faith and hope – and I’m so glad that it has all turned out so much better – and happier for you. As it should be.

    I only hope my situation will resolve itself as gladly as yours has – time will tell.

    Well done Michael – and thanks for sharing such an integral part of “your story” in your beautiful way. 🙂

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