Mondays Finish the Story – June 8th, 2015 – Igor

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Finish the story begins with:  “Zeus was not having a good day and he made sure everyone knew it.”

He goes on doesn’t he.

Always.

Nothing ever seems right.

He is all thunder and lightening you know.

Yes, every so often he wants to remind us that he is all-powerful.

Well you do antagonise him.

Me?

Yes you.

What do I do?

Well you irritate him. Your name always comes up in meetings.

What does he say?

He says things like why is Igor so irritating.

And?

We all look blankly at him.

What ‘s he do then?

Zaps the nearest servant, rumbles and claps deafening thunder.

Didn’t know he was passionate.

Oh he is.

Its up to you Igor to make a few changes.

But I’m disabled.

In what way?

I have structural issues.

That’s a cop out.

What about up there, on my shoulder?

You mean your hump?

I have a hump too?

Written for: https://mondaysfinishthestory.wordpress.com/2015/06/08/mondays-finish-the-story-june-8th-2015/

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26 Responses to Mondays Finish the Story – June 8th, 2015 – Igor

  1. LRose's avatar LRose says:

    The end made me giggle!

  2. Excellent! Loved it and especially the last line. Brilliant Michael.

  3. taleweavering's avatar phylor says:

    Last line is great. Poor Igor!

  4. This is hilarious. And a nice job of carrying on a conversation with no quotation marks. I didn’t get confused once.

  5. dellclover's avatar DELL CLOVER says:

    Oh sheesh!! And I thought I had problems.

  6. babso2you's avatar babso2you says:

    I loved the story and the last line Michael. Drew to mind that movie “Young Frankenstein” where the comment is made to the Marty Feldman character about the hump… 😀 Thanks for your contribution to the challenge and be well… ^..^

  7. Shivangi's avatar Shivangi says:

    Enjoyed this story… V interesting conversation 😀😀😀

  8. Louise Bunting's avatar afairymind says:

    Poor Igor! He definitely has problems, doesn’t he? Great story, Michael. 🙂

  9. ЭSKI's avatar Francesca Smith says:

    That last line made me laugh, and it reminded me of a Monty Python sketch! Probably something from the Life of Brian.

  10. Wonderful… love Young Frankenstein and how you wove it into this story. Well done!

  11. Zeus shouldn’t complain. It looks like Igor has a lot more problems. Funny ending, Michael. Well done. 😀 — Suzanne

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