“Words to Write By” Prompt #7 – Best Holiday

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This week’s words: naïve unite curve magenta efficiency dazzle impervious dejected vanilla garland

It was without a doubt the best holiday we had ever had. From our arrival on the island where we were greeted by local girls who lay garlands around our necks, to the beaches, the bars, the nightclubs and luxury at our fingertips in the form of the most amazing accommodation you could imagine.

You could say we were a little naïve about the local customs but my travelling companion Amanda had encouraged me to come with her to the Island of Superova.

Amanda was one of those women blessed with curves all geometrically falling in the right places. Where the rest of us spent our every waking moment worrying about our spreading midriff Amanda ate and drank whatever she fancied and never seemed to put on a gram in weight,

She dazzled most men who saw her as a woman far younger than her actual years and she was impervious to the come ons from most men who approached her in the bar.

The first night on the island she wore a stunning magenta dress that showed off her every asset, she turned every head in the restaurant and left every would be suitor a dejected mess.

Later when we sat on the break wall licking our vanilla ice-creams, which she did with priceless efficiency, we decided that the next day we would unite and take on the coral reef and dazzle ourselves in the warm waters viewing the myriad of fish we knew awaited us.

It was indeed a great holiday.

Written for: https://therattlingbones.wordpress.com/2015/05/21/words-to-write-by-prompt-7/

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12 Responses to “Words to Write By” Prompt #7 – Best Holiday

  1. deadlydarklyme's avatar loricarlson66 says:

    Wow Michael! That is an amazing story using today’s prompt words! I love it!

  2. sounds like a really good holiday, Michael 🙂 I envy Amanda and her curves, cheers again!

  3. Blogger's avatar mandy says:

    Loved this, Michael, and felt like I was there enjoying the beautiful island and getaway. Your traveling companion sounds like the envy of every woman and the dream of every man. I don’t want to dampen the mood, but she may end up having a chicken neck eventually. 😀

  4. milliethom's avatar milliethom says:

    Graet story, Michael I love the description of Amanda’s curves! Quite a stunner in her magenta dress. Lovely descriptions throughout. 🙂

  5. deadlydarklyme's avatar loricarlson66 says:

    Reblogged this on The Rattling Bones and commented:
    Sensual poetry from Thursday’s Daily Prompt

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