“Words to Write By” Prompt #6 – Azaleas

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Words to play with: azalea century wine disturbance skirt steal wade habit incompatible illusion

My mother grew azaleas

Some time in the last century.

She’d sit and sip a glass of wine

Ignoring the disturbance of birds up above.

Her skirts were always full,

Of flowers and native birds

She hunted the minor birds who waited to steal

Whatever they could grab.

On Tuesdays she’d wade across the ford

For her habit was to visit an aunt

Who lived a bizarre life

Incompatible with other family

But my mother was a wise old soul

And understood the illusion

Of my crazy old aunt

Whose own azalea garden my mother loved.

She taught my mum to sip wine demurely

As a lady from a clay goblet.

My mother who grew azaleas

Lived into the next century

Had her share of the oddest habits

But we loved her nevertheless.

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11 Responses to “Words to Write By” Prompt #6 – Azaleas

  1. deadlydarklyme's avatar loricarlson66 says:

    Bravo! You did an amazing job with the prompt! It is rich in imagery and so beautifully written.

  2. Blogger's avatar mandy says:

    I love azaleas, too. And the occasional glass of wine. Sipped demurely. Uh oh…

  3. I love azaleas and your poem, Michael 🙂

  4. mj6969's avatar mj6969 says:

    There is a delightful feeling to this piece Michael – it flows as naturally as sitting sipping wine, watching azaleas – and I love how you have so adeptly created the images – “Her skirts were always full, / Of flowers and native birds / She hunted the minor birds who waited to steal / Whatever they could grab. ”

    I adore this image – such poetic justice. 😀

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