Poetics – Winners and Losers – Each Other

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As dawn appears,

A soft alarm sounds.

A father rises,

Another day of toil looms.

In another room his children sleep.

Beside him his wife

Exhausted from mothering

Sleeps on.

He knows she will rise at the first call

The youngest awakening,

Calling for her, wanting to be fed.

On the kitchen table

The sad reminders of the previous night

The welter of bills

Stacked in piles of priority.

This week he can keep the power on

Next week maybe there will be enough

To treat them a take away.

He dresses in the half-light

His ragged overalls must do another year

His boots are new work safety is strict

They cost a week’s rent

But he must work, the landlord understands

The two men often sit and share the landlord’s beer

They connect as men do.

He selects the crusts from yesterday’s bread

Spreads a thin layer of butter

Cuts a slice of cheese in half

Enough to get him through the day.

He visits his children, watches as they begin to stir

They are beautiful children

He is proud of them.

He turns to go, the eldest sees her dad

Watches as he wipes a tear from his eye

Knows he will trudge off to work

Return late tonight

As he has another job in the evening

She wonders how long he can do that

She needs her dad.

They don’t have much she knows

But they have each other.

Written for: http://dversepoets.com/2014/12/02/poetics-winners-and-losers/

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35 Responses to Poetics – Winners and Losers – Each Other

  1. Grace's avatar Grace says:

    Such a brave and courageous family man ~ At least he has work and can support his family ~ Having each other in the trying times can be a source of comfort ~ Have a good week M ~

  2. Mary's avatar Mary says:

    “They don’t have much she knows
    But they have each other.”

    This man (this family) is a winner, I think. Despite all that they lack, what they have is important.

  3. brian miller's avatar brian miller says:

    that is all it takes…i have great respect for guys that make the sacrifices for their fam…and the ladies that do as well…its not much, but in the end…all it takes is loving each other in the midst of it…great story man

  4. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    I admire those who work two jobs. I do not think I could do that and hope I never have to. You made us feel these people were real.

  5. As long as they have each other and struggle through tough times, love is always the feeling of energy and togetherness.

    Excellent piece my friend. 🙂

  6. So much at times is upon the parents, their heavy load to carry. The wife with carrying and raising the children. The husband being the bread winner, doing the best he can. As long as there is love in the house, they get by. Tough times though, written well my friend.

  7. Angie Mc's avatar Angie Mc says:

    Perfect, tommy, perhaps my favorite. We just watched “A Christmas Carol” last night. You capture the bittersweet love of family in much fewer words than Dickens. A compliment to you ❤

  8. not having much, but seeing the father do his damn best to make sure his family has the necessities is winning… and loving… smiles

  9. Kathy Reed's avatar Kathy Reed says:

    All we can do is our best at the time…we need not punish ourselves if we don’t succeed at everything..what is important, as you say, is the purity of good intent.

  10. So many ways to be a winner.. I hope he manage to carry that burden. To not get sick, to just pull through. That’s winning.

  11. The true winners in life to me.. are the ones like this who struggle enough

    to never live..

    without love…:)

  12. Lyn's avatar Lyn says:

    That was just beautiful, Michael. If only all struggling families could have so much love for each other and contentment.

  13. MarinaSofia's avatar MarinaSofia says:

    You describe in very concrete, simple language a harsh life but a strong family bond there. Sadly, in so many poverty-stricken families, the stress of daily life takes its toll and breaks up the family as well. Sometimes hard times bring us closer together and sometimes they tear us apart.

  14. kaykuala h's avatar kaykuala h says:

    It is forever a struggle! Having a family makes decision-making slightly restrictive as not too much risks should be taken. And at least the family is intact! Great write Michael!

    Hank

  15. margaretbednar's avatar margaret says:

    Love is a powerful motivator. Life is often unfair and some never beat the odds, but this poem makes me believe the Father does.

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