Prompt #71″Why me?”

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‘Why me?’ I heard you say

The arse ripped out of your pants:

Leaving you destitute

Out on the street,

In penury they claimed in court.

 

‘Its not my fault,’ you pleaded

‘I’m a innocent victim of circumstance.

Is it my responsibility to read

To know what it is

Of repercussions be aware?’

 

‘I trusted.’

He said ‘I’d be good

I was on a winner

In good faith I signed on the line.

A charlatan is what he turned out to be.’

 

‘I sunk my savings into his scheme

He smiled said I’d be rich,

That my money was safe

Within days I’d see benefits.

Not him sneaking away with the lot.’

 

‘Why me?’ I heard you ask

‘Cause you’re an idiot?’ I gestured

‘You trusted a crook

Didn’t read the fine print

You got what you signed up for.’

 

‘So don’t go crying poor mouth

You’re always a sucker for sweet talk.

You fell for it, now lick your wounds

Take stock, pick yourself up

It’s time to look after you.’

 

‘Why me,’ you forlornly ask

As you mournfully stir your coffee

‘I thought I’d be rich, have it made.’

‘You know,’ I say as we spoon in the sugar

‘If it was as easy as that, we’d all be rich.’

 

Written for: http://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2014/09/07/prompt-71why-me/

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14 Responses to Prompt #71″Why me?”

  1. kaykuala's avatar kaykuala says:

    A number of hopefuls had been tricked. But still the gullible believed of the ‘likely windfall’ which later were translated as frustrations and disappointments! A pity as these were not small amounts they would have lost. Good lines!

    Hank

  2. If it sounds too good to be true, it most likely is, how often can we be fooled.
    Well done Michael.

  3. Great job Michael I love the message of personal responsibility in this because so often we give up our power in thinking of ourselves as victims

  4. Lyn's avatar Lyn says:

    The start of this reminded me of the poem “When Your Pants Begin to Go” by Henry Lawson 🙂
    LOL what is that old saying? “If it seems too good to be true it probably is.” Aaah, your MC is just the right sort of friend in a situation like this 🙂

  5. Very clever and very true!! 🙂 🙂

  6. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    It really sucks when schemers take advantage of other people’s hard earned money.
    Because sometimes people just suck – we need to be careful with these types of “great” offers.

  7. indigowildchild55's avatar Pat says:

    ” ‘So don’t go crying poor mouth

    You’re always a sucker for sweet talk. ”

    This is such a poetic and forceful use of words Michael – absolutely brilliant.

    The tone of this piece is just wonderful. One can sense the one wanting commiseration – and the other offering truth – almost with an accepted indifference – as in – “if it were so easy …”

    Love this work Michael. Excellent. 🙂

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