Friday Fictioneers – Bastards

janet-webbs-sangria

Photo thanks to janet webb.

 

That Janet M Webb is a stunning woman isn’t she?

Without a doubt.

I’m so pleased you asked me to come and see this exhibition.

I knew you’d love it.

Another drink?

Please!

What do you think she is thinking?

I’m sure its some thing to do with…… you know…..

Oh yes of course.

The poor thing was in a loveless marriage.

Yes she was, bastard wanted the house and the car.

Really? I can understand then what drove her to what she did.

She would have gotten away with it too.

The boyfriend?

An undercover cop.

Men!

All bastards!

This entry was posted in Friday Fiction and tagged , , , , . Bookmark the permalink.

54 Responses to Friday Fictioneers – Bastards

  1. JackieP's avatar JackieP says:

    Oh ho! Sounds familiar. I love it!

  2. Great take on the pic!! You are humorous guy…. 🙂

  3. Oh really are they? All of them? Ya sure? Ok some of them lol, you made me giggle with this.

  4. Very entertaining. Those damned men always snooping around and getting to things that have no business getting into.

  5. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    Men…

    There are still a few good ones out there. Glad I found one of them. Or – should I say – glad that he found me. 🙂

  6. Lyn's avatar Lyn says:

    You never cease to amaze me with your takes on these prompts, MIchael. Just glad not all men are bastards. The one my daughter married certainly isn’t, he’s an absolute gem.

  7. Well written. Great dialogue. You never know where these undercover police are going to turn up next.

  8. Georgia's avatar Bastet says:

    Like this one a lot…seems like one of those great thinks that come through the muse!

  9. Sarah Ann's avatar Sarah Ann says:

    Great conversation. Like the way you subtly include both aspects of the prompt.

  10. liz young's avatar liz young says:

    I wish she HAD got away with it!

  11. atrm61's avatar atrm61 says:

    Ha!ha!ha!I can’t stop laughing Michael!This is excellent-the dialogues so apt,love it:-)

  12. She learnt how to paint in prison? Ah well.

  13. draliman's avatar draliman says:

    Very amusing dialogue, I enjoyed your take on this prompt 🙂

  14. Dear Michael,

    I thought I knew Janet better than that. 😉 Fun dialogue. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  15. hugmamma's avatar hugmamma says:

    Just read another undercover copy entry. Both very good takes on the prompt.

  16. Tournesol's avatar Cheryl-Lynn says:

    Oh my that was a surprise and good read!!

  17. Ha.. never trust men… deceiving man deceiving boyfriend.

  18. Nan Falkner's avatar Nan Falkner says:

    I read a “hit man” undercover cop story earlier. I like this and that one too. Good story, Thanks! Nan

  19. Sun's avatar Sun says:

    loveless marriages can cause desperate measures to occur…poor dear. i like your dialogue format, Michael!

Leave a reply to summerstommy2 Cancel reply