Gift

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This is shared with Poetry Jam where the prompt today is to write about GIFT

I’ve searched for ways

To make you see

That beneath this rough exterior

There lies a person.

Just a man,

Nothing special.

A mass of flesh and blood.

I scream when in pain,

I laugh when joyful.

I listen in moments

You plead my attention.

I dry your tears,

Give you my shoulder

It’s broad, so you can cry.

I talk with you

About things that matter to us.

There’s not a lot else to me

Just me.

It’s the only gift I offer you.

It’s free, no strings attached

Take it or leave it.

My gift to you, my one love.

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38 Responses to Gift

  1. alan1704's avatar alan1704 says:

    brilliantly captured and this comes from the heart. Great lines and emotion.

  2. So beautiful a true gift!

  3. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    Our authentic selves can indeed be true gifts to others. Another heart-felt poem, Michael!

  4. Kalpana Solsi's avatar Kalpana Solsi says:

    A simple poem written from the heart. loved it.

  5. Mary's avatar Mary says:

    It would be a lucky person indeed who would be the recipient of this poem. A poem from the heart expressing ‘real’ thoughts without platitudes. Poetry is a wonderful gift!

    Welcome to Poetry Jam, Michael.

  6. Helen's avatar Helen says:

    This … is a man of immense depth, perception.

  7. splkplo's avatar Laurie Kolp says:

    A much appreciated gift.

  8. brian miller's avatar brian miller says:

    giving the gift of ourselves…what better could we give…our love, our time, our presence…that is all it takes most times….good to see you again michael…i went school with mine ha.

  9. Such a beautiful gift to offer! Especially with no strings attached!

  10. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    I love the realistic side of this poem. It makes the gift that more special.

  11. vandana's avatar vandana says:

    this is true unconditional love

  12. poetrypea's avatar poetrypea says:

    A precious message of the most precious gift.

  13. Kathe W.'s avatar Kathe W. says:

    the gift of self is the best gift of all

  14. peggygoetz's avatar peggygoetz says:

    A lovely gift, the gift of self. Beautifully expressed.

  15. Sara v's avatar Sara v says:

    Shoot–Peggy took my lines–I’ll reiterate–a gift of self, most appreciated, especially freely given with broad shoulders 🙂 A lovely write.

  16. Nick's avatar Nick says:

    Beautifully simple!

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