Five Sentence Story – Thunder

Cricket

The game was reaching a point where not one person was willing to leave their seat for fear of missing some crucial play.

It was down to the last overs and we had twenty runs to make in order to win.

Our last two batters were at the crease when the first of the thunder was heard rumbling away to the west.

The batters with so few to get and a few overs left decided to play for their lives as the thunder rumbled closer.

Never before had we seen our number eleven play with such aggression that as the first drops landed so did he achieve what we all thought was the impossible.

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14 Responses to Five Sentence Story – Thunder

  1. Ah cricket… a sore subject between a Brit and an Aussie, right?! 🙂

    • Michael's avatar summerstommy2 says:

      Yes Freya and knowing that I should have cast you as the nun belting the kid for his brown eye. But I am pleased you saw the humour in the piece. Don’t worry it won’t be long before we give you poms another deserved hiding in the cricket. Though the way we are going that could be a while off.

  2. Penny L Howe's avatar Penny L Howe says:

    I’d stay too. When a person get’s into the game (in sports) as a spectator it’s hard to level even in the worst of weather! 🙂 xo

  3. McGuffy's Reader's avatar McGuffy Ann says:

    When it is your sport, you wait it out! You captured this. Nicely done.

  4. nightlake's avatar nightlake says:

    The last over and only two batsmen out there..and if they happen to be bowlers, there is very less chance of winning..They wildly have a go (without technique), hoping for a six:)) well captured here

  5. Patricia's avatar Patricia says:

    I know nothing about cricket but if your team needs your support you stay. No fair weather fans need apply.

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