Five Sentence Fiction – Travel

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Are you ready the bus leaves in twenty minutes?

Nearly, have to make sure the iron is off, the cats out and my money is secure.

I am so excited about this trip, we will have such a great time.

When are you going to tell me where we are going?

When we get there my love, when we get there.

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10 Responses to Five Sentence Fiction – Travel

  1. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    I like the bit about the iron. I get pretty obsessive about it in fact.
    Nice piece throughout!

  2. Argh! This speaks to all the worries I seem to have developed of late about going away for a short holiday tomorrow. I desperately need the break but am paranoid about forgetting/losing/not turning off etc all manner of things. Whihc is a reinforcement of the fact that I need the break! 🙂

    • Michael's avatar summerstommy2 says:

      Yes Freya you need a break. Go and have a good time. leave it all behind you. And thanks for your comment.

  3. surprise surprise! we’re goin’ on a holiday 🙂 Though the making sure the money is secure ..has me pondering….

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