Grasp – Trifecta Week 90- Gees Louise

The Trifecta writing challenge is to write a creative response of no fewer than 33 and no more than 333 words, using a one-word prompt.

This week’s word is:

GRASP (verb):
3: to lay hold of with the mind: comprehend

 

Gees Louise

Louise looked at me with fiery eyes and this time stressed the point she was making.

‘I am not interested in being with you in any way shape or form.

You are not my type; you are persisting with something that is never going to happen.

Why waste your time. Get on with your life. I don’t want to part of it.’

I had heard it all before and so once again felt the fool for asking her out in the first place.

You build yourself up to ask, you grasp whatever courage is left from the last time you stepped forward, only to find a similar result.

I had discovered the women I was interested in were in no way interested in me.

The joke amongst my friends was that I did have women knocking on my door, trouble was they were on the inside trying to get out.

I had engaged in conversation with Louise a number of times at work and so it seemed a logical progression to ask her out.

We went to a bar where we enjoyed a pleasant evening. However it was on the way home that she put the kibosh on any future dates.

She was not interested; she had had too many bad experiences with men.

To put it bluntly I had balls and therefore that alone put me into the vermin category.

As she so succinctly stated, ‘What part of no don’t you understand!’

Our evening ended with her jumping out of my car and heading up her garden path, disappearing into her unit leaving me wondering how I got myself into a mess like this.

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17 Responses to Grasp – Trifecta Week 90- Gees Louise

  1. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    Poor narrator! You have conveyed his dismay very well!

  2. Oh dear, she’s not a ball liker then? Sorry couldn’t help myself 😀 x

  3. The Real Cie's avatar The Real Cie says:

    I always tended to be interested in men who were either not interested in me, were bad for me, or both. Bleah.

  4. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    Messed up when a previous relationship takes over ones future relationships.

  5. Better not to pursue this one, I think! Too much baggage. 🙂 Thanks for linking up. Don’t forget to come back and vote at the end of the challenge.

  6. jannatwrites's avatar jannatwrites says:

    I felt bad for the narrator. Good to keep a distance from women like this. For some reason, she reminded me of a girl I knew in high school. She was a complete man-hater and wrote a really mean rant in my yearbook about them. I always thought it was a bit young to be so bitter…now I wonder if she ever got married 🙂

    • Michael's avatar summerstommy2 says:

      Thanks Janna, yes the narrator has a lot to deal with and one hopes she does eventually let go her guilt. the girl you knew maybe is happily engaged in a same sex relationship. Then again you never know.

  7. Draug419's avatar Draug419 says:

    There has to be The One out there somewhere. The thing to do is just to keep trying.

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