Alastairs Photo Fiction – A New Strategy

20-08-august-11th-2013

It had been another tough day for Paul. Sales were down and his future was looking bleak.

Life for the humble ice cream vendor was a constant struggle.

He was sitting with Miss Mary, the tattooist, who was also having a difficult time as well.

He often sat with Miss Mary and her assistant Lenny the Needle. Together they lamented their choice of occupation in a world so rapidly changing.

‘It’s a hard game,’ Paul said to her as they sat sharing a double peaches and cream.

Paul’s whole family had been in confectionary. Father, fathers father all that sort of thing.

Family tradition was important he wanted to believe.

As it was the bicycle driven cart was the one built by his grandfather in 1928.

The only thing that had changed was the pricing on the front.

Right now Paul was facing the end of his time and he knew it.

There were stalls being set up all along the beachfronts with cheaper ice creams and greater variety.

He was on a new marketing strategy; he had to do something he thought.

Do you think the new uniform works? He asked

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17 Responses to Alastairs Photo Fiction – A New Strategy

  1. paulmclem's avatar paulmclem says:

    No harm in a spot of re-branding!

  2. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    The things people are ready to do for self-promotion!

  3. julespaige's avatar julespaige says:

    We have to change, though it is a tough sell. Especially regarding traditions.

    I was trying to romanticize espionage – Though there is no romance in lies.

    • Michael's avatar summerstommy2 says:

      Thanks Jules yes the reality of addressing change is hard for all of us.
      I agree there isn’t a lot of romancing in espionage unless you are James Bond.

  4. EagleAye's avatar EagleAye says:

    That’s the spirit! Everyone is rebranding these days. You really had me going there. I thought Paul was the older guy in the photo sitting with woman. Tricky, tricky, and good writing to boot!

    • Michael's avatar summerstommy2 says:

      Thank you good sir I am happy that I got you going, as I was writing the thought occurred to me to try and trick the reader, that’s one for me then…..lol

  5. Lyn's avatar Lyn says:

    Perhaps Paul could consider making smaller versions of his ice cream cart and selling them to the ice cream stalls on the beach. The stalls are stationary. They need to be able to serve customers at the far ends of the beach. Get the competition going. A few deliberate crashes or flat tyres. Maybe they’ll drive each other out of business and then Paul can have a free run 🙂

    • Michael's avatar summerstommy2 says:

      That’s a rather sinister view of the ice cream business. Isn’t it about competition? Dear oh dear Lyn what’s the world coming to? Though I would have thought there would need to be ‘accidental crashes’: oops I’m sounding like you. Thank you for your entertaining comment.

  6. Nina Lewis's avatar neenslewy says:

    Great twist at the end and a clever way of incorporating the uniforms. I doubt he could slash the prices much from £1!

    • Michael's avatar summerstommy2 says:

      Thanks Neens I did find this story difficult, several drafts before this one emerged that made slightly more sense than my earlier drafts. I’m not sure including the uniform in that way is successful or just me finding a last minute way to include it.

  7. Very amusing, mate!
    Liked the way you pulled in all the bits whereas AnElephant just kinda ignores these things!
    Well done.

  8. RoSy's avatar RoSy says:

    I bet Paul’s ice-cream tastes better though.

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