Five Sentence Fiction – Wisdom

 

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In his thirtieth year Phillip met Maisie Dates the most beautiful woman he had ever seen but who frowned at his loose ways and moral ineptitude.

Phillip was very keen to impress Maisie so he read every book he could find about connecting with the love of his life.

He then went out and bought her roses, chocolates and expensive jewelry.

He stood beneath her window singing sentimental songs until the wee hours.

Maisie, who had never been impressed with try hard men, suggested Phillip might succeed if he tried to understand who he was and then act on that.

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12 Responses to Five Sentence Fiction – Wisdom

  1. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    Poor Philip! He didn’t get it, did he?

  2. McGuffy's Reader's avatar McGuffy Ann says:

    She was wise to give advice; he should be wise and take it.

    • Michael's avatar summerstommy2 says:

      Well Ann I somehow think the concept she was suggesting will go over his head. Thank you for your comment.

  3. K. R. Smith's avatar K. R. Smith says:

    When Phillip read those books, it seems he understood the words but not the story. Or maybe they were just really bad books…

    Nice story!

  4. unrequited love – poor guy – sometimes the lessons are hard.

  5. I rather like sleeping during the wee hours. I don’t think I’d be appreciate someone interrupting that sleep.

  6. ahblack57's avatar ahblack57 says:

    It seems he can’t win for losing. At least the fella tried.

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