Displaced– Alastair’s Photo Fiction

 

Displaced– Alastair’s Photo Fiction

Alastair is both a writer and a photographer. The idea of Alastair’s Photo Fiction is that a photo that he has taken is used as a prompt for flash fiction – a short story – or poem of around 150 words.

 

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Michael O’Grougan was last week the Lord of O’Grougan Manor.

His family had been displaced by the American invasion.

He was a determined man and he knew he would never have balance in his life until his honour was restored.

His men gathered around him, armed to the teeth with protest signs.

‘Men,’ he said, ‘Men of the O’Grougan tribe, I have anguished about this day. We must stand as one. We must protect our good name.

The O’Grougans have been Lords of O’Grougan Manor since the word dot. If not then, then shortly afterwards.’

O’Grougan had the gift of the gab. He used to be good at whipping up support.

Suddenly all hell broke loose. His men ran off towards the castle.

‘What, what,’ stammered O’Grougan.

‘The K-Mart is opening you stupid idjget.’

‘Oh.’ said O’Grougan, looking forlornly at the K-Mart flag being raised above his castle.

 

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18 Responses to Displaced– Alastair’s Photo Fiction

  1. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    It is difficult to fight this consumer society, isn’t it? You’ve got to be sorry for Michael O’Grougan; his is a lost cause. A funny story!

  2. Alastair's avatar Alastair says:

    Haha I love that 😀

    Made me laugh out loud 😀

  3. I read this off my phone before calling it a night and I laughed out loud! The Lord of The Manor’s pride & joy -his castle succumbed to the K Mart flag. What a brilliant ending – thank you – enjoyed.

  4. M K Zebra's avatar misskzebra says:

    Hmmm. I can imagine Starbucks taking over the Tate.

  5. lewiscave's avatar lewiscave says:

    A K-Mart Castle. I would rush to check it out too.

  6. Nina Lewis's avatar neenslewy says:

    A great take on the prompt – many historical buildings are in ruins maybe this is the future….

  7. nightlake's avatar nightlake says:

    really humorous. Thanks for the laugh:)

  8. Dave Williams's avatar zookyworld says:

    Watch out for the American invasion — really neat that you tied this to K-Mart raising its flag at the castle. A fun story!

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