Friday Fictioneers – Cabrito

Cabrito

Friday fiction july 10

Joseph hated cemetery duty.

His job each week was to tidy up, pull out the weeds and make sure there was not too much desecration.

By lunchtime he had found a shady spot under a tree.

He spied the goat that had wandered into the cemetery. His immediate thought was dinner.

Fresh meat was a rarity these days.

Looking around he could see no owner.

Mouth watering he began tasting the cabrito.

His mother’s Dijon Cabrito was to die for.

Trying to look inconspicuous he edged closer to his prey.

 

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61 Responses to Friday Fictioneers – Cabrito

  1. Sandra's avatar Sandra says:

    I wouldn’t fancy my chances catching a goat. Nice one!

  2. Dear Summerstory,

    Loved your title which sent me to Google. Sounds yummy. Nice one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  3. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella says:

    Excellent! I wonder what Dijon Cabrito tastes like. I suppose Dijon refers to mustard.
    A lot of food in your stories this week! 🙂

    • Michael's avatar summerstommy2 says:

      Thanks Gabriella. Good point, could be the no food diet I live on. My guess is goat meat with mustard..lol

  4. vb guenther's avatar vbholmes says:

    “His mother’s Dijon Cabrito was to die for.” Most appropriate comment. And a good story–when you’re hungry, the location of your prey is of little consequence.

  5. Kwadwo's avatar Kwadwo says:

    Poor goat. He never saw it coming. Soon, he’ll be in a grave of his own, or at least some of him.

  6. Joe Owens's avatar Joe Owens says:

    I”l bet the goat put up quite a fight. Looks like he has his eyes on the culprit right now.

  7. H. Ken Abell's avatar H. Ken Abell says:

    I’m glad I wrote mine before I read yours, or else I’d feel bad about using Spanglish. Nice tale.

  8. Linda Vernon's avatar Linda Vernon says:

    Run little goat! Run! I really enjoyed this

  9. JKBradley's avatar JKBradley says:

    What wine goes best?

    Or, he could keep the goat since they do perform as well as any mower ever conceived.

    • Michael's avatar summerstommy2 says:

      Yes that is true JK then again he doesn’t seem o have a lot to chew on. Thanks for your comment.

  10. Carrie's avatar Carrie says:

    poor goat!! Run, goaty run!

  11. Reminds me of one Saturday morning at the farmer’s market where we were selling chevre. Some Muslim men came up and asked if we sold goat. We didn’t, but told them about some placs that might.

    janet

    • Michael's avatar summerstommy2 says:

      Thank you Janet your farmers market provides you a variety of life experiences. I have garnered a lot of interesting responses to this piece. And I didn’t think it such a good response.have a good day, dawn breaks here winter is upon us, but the day is ahead words to write.

      • Sometimes I’ve put out a story I think’s really good and it doesn’t get a great response; sometimes, the opposite. Have to follow the muse (or whatever.) 🙂

        You have a good day, too.

        janet

      • Michael's avatar summerstommy2 says:

        How often does that happen. I think it is a bit of a life lesson. What we often think is ‘genius’ is only happening in our heads not in any one else’s. When I do the challenges I am trying to produce something I think might be half decent so I am astounded when so many people respond to say they have enjoyed it. Though I did play with this one, cabrito was a bit naughty of me. I think I made a lot of people go to google. Lol.

  12. Dee's avatar Dee says:

    Great story.
    Tried goat curry once… not a fan
    Dee

  13. helenahannbasquiat's avatar Helena Hann-Basquiat says:

    You captured a bleak picture of hunger and necessity, something the majority of us will never experience. It was very well written, darling.

    • Michael's avatar summerstommy2 says:

      Thank you so much for your comment Helena. I appreciate it. It is not everyday I get called “darling’!! You have made my day.

  14. Oooh. Great story! Even if you did kill off my goat. I love it. Goat meat is good. Randy

  15. Having just read David’s story, I think you’d better stay away from the goat.

  16. To die for, huh? You mean the goat, right?

    • Michael's avatar summerstommy2 says:

      Well you have to have a goat for Dijon Cabrito but it also refers to his mum’s amazing cooking. Thanks so much for your comment.

  17. Dave Williams's avatar zookyworld says:

    Hunting in an unusual place… hey, whenever opportunity knocks, right?

  18. I’m rooting for the goat! Cute story.

  19. Goat does taste lovely. Great story – now I feel hungry…. 🙂

  20. Aha. And why not. (And I’ll go look up some recipes for cabrito. Not heard of of before.)

  21. Maybe tame goats are easier, but I know wild goats are almost impossible to catch. Good luck to Joseph though.

  22. lewis cave's avatar lewis cave says:

    I think goat tastes yucky! Just thought I would throw that out there. Great story.

  23. Neat tale, very well told.

  24. Penny L Howe's avatar Penny L Howe says:

    Well written, seems I’m saying that frequently to you lately! I’m guessing because it’s true! 🙂 A very clever take on the prompt and a good story too!

    • Michael's avatar summerstommy2 says:

      Thank you Penny.I do so enjoy these tasks.Being on holidays these past two weeks has given me a lot of time to think about it. Tomorrow is back to work so I may not be able to meet all ‘expectation’.
      Oh well I shall try nevertheless. I think the 100 word task is an excellent challenge. Makes you think. Thanks again for the compliment.

  25. K.Z.'s avatar kz says:

    great story, you painted a really sad picture of starvation.. never had a cabrito before, so i Googled it and learned something new today 🙂

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