
It was a fine day, and they had taken advantage to go to the beach. He tempted her to paddle out onto the water where she would be able to see the ocean floor where fish and corals abounded.
The water was calm and the view spectacular.
Next, she was under the water being rolled like seaweed along the sea floor. She was powerless against the force of the water.
Something hit her, as she had no memory until she woke up some twenty metres from the water’s edge.
Among the devastation, a child was crying. Otherwise, it was silent.
Written for: https://bikurgurl.com/2018/05/16/100-word-wednesday-week-71/
Very tragic tale.
Thanks so much Neel.
Another part coming?
Goodness you think so?
Yup! : )
Another 100 💯 words eh?
Or more..
I’ll see what I can do.
Cool
Glad you followed it up Michael
Thanks Di..
I’m glad she’s alive for their to be a part 2!
Did you ever see the film “Hereafter’?
No. I saw the movie Tidal Wave.
Hereafter has the female star caught up in a tsunami at the beginning of the film.