Trifextra: Week Seventy-Nine – Relationship.

Posted on August 4, 2013 by Michael

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Our relationship has the life span of a butterfly.

How?

At sunset we vanish.

But there’s tomorrow.

Only if you wait.

You’ll wait for me?

Of course.

How can you be sure?

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13 Responses to Trifextra: Week Seventy-Nine – Relationship.

  1. ramblingsfromamum's avatar ramblingsfromamum says:
    August 4, 2013 at 8:56 am

    always leave a question … this was succinct summer but one which left me nodding yes to what you wrote.

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  2. Cobbie's World's avatar Cobbie's World says:
    August 4, 2013 at 3:20 pm

    This is so very sweet and delicate and innocent and important. “Will you be there for me?” is one of the fundamental questions that form the foundation of any relationship. Excellent take on the prompt!

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  3. jannatwrites's avatar jannatwrites says:
    August 4, 2013 at 8:38 pm

    Nicely written! I love the question at the end. How can we be sure?

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  4. trifectawriting's avatar trifectawriting says:
    August 4, 2013 at 11:09 pm

    The dedication is sweet. Thank you for linking up!

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  5. Draug419's avatar Draug419 says:
    August 5, 2013 at 12:36 am

    Oh wow I really like this one. It reminds me of a short story I’ve written.

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  6. Let's CUT the Crap!'s avatar Let's CUT the Crap! says:
    August 5, 2013 at 2:39 pm

    Touching. I ache after the question, “You’ll wait for me?” but then wonder after the last line, if that’s mistrust or yearning. Awesome!

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