8 Responses to Five Sentence Story – Bliss

1. ramblingsfromamum says:

   August 2, 2013 at 6:54 am

   smiles – sounds more like arguing than bliss 😉

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2. summerstommy2 says:

   August 2, 2013 at 1:20 pm

   Thank you RM. Imagine the two voices belonging to a boy and a girl who are staring helplessly into each others eyes saying the lines as above. Starry eyed sweet nothings.

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3. K. R. Smith says:

   August 4, 2013 at 2:11 am

   Ah, yes – a competition to see who loves the other the most! Great use of those short sentences!

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   • summerstommy2 says:

     August 4, 2013 at 2:23 am

     Thank you good sir, I was playing with the notion that in five sentences can I say a minimum of words and still make sense.

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4. Lizzie Koch (@lizzie_loodles) says:

   August 4, 2013 at 8:05 pm

   Ahh, this is so cute! I can imagine two cutsie children in the playground with this one. Excellent use of short sentences.

   http://40somethingundomesticateddevil.blogspot.co.uk/2013/08/five-sentence-fiction-bliss-dogs-point.html

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   • summerstommy2 says:

     August 5, 2013 at 9:19 am

     Thanks Lizzie it was an attempt to create a story using the smallest number of words.

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5. Joe Owens says:

   August 5, 2013 at 5:09 pm

   Simple little equation that perfectly defines the word bliss.

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   • summerstommy2 says:

     August 6, 2013 at 6:36 am

     Thanks Joe I appreciate you reading my posts.

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